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 Short Story One: Your Embrace.

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PostSubject: Short Story One: Your Embrace.   Sun Mar 21, 2010 4:10 pm

For all your embrace I'm lost in a void, a silence filled with passion. Time stops, waits for our souls, in prey of an incessant spell, to wake up each in our own body. My heart fills, with light dreams, my mind begins to travel between a thousand thoughts, and then reflected in the universe contained in your sweet eyes. I reach the peak of my happiness, my emotions assault; explode so many feelings that I can not even explain. No need of words, no gesture, only the light of your eyes. It's not easy to describe an emotion. The thrill of feeling loved, searched for. The thrill of a look, a kiss. I could write plenty of terms, I could think of all that is most beautiful in the world, but I could never describe what I feel when I'm near you. Let me hide myself in your eyes, I would do this to hide from the incessant noise, to find the infinite, to live in you, to escape the world. I would hide myself in your eyes, so when you shut them asleep, I'd remain a prisoner forever inside you.

Side note: I don't know if I could classify this as a short story.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story One: Your Embrace.   Sun Mar 21, 2010 7:16 pm

Wow.. Just wow! You're an amazing writer.
*Speechless*! D:
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story One: Your Embrace.   Mon Mar 22, 2010 4:44 pm

Wow this hit me pretty hard.
Damn good that's for sure.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story One: Your Embrace.   Mon Mar 29, 2010 9:56 pm

PThank you both, so much ♥️
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